Talk:2020 Sparta earthquake/GA1

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Nominator: Dora the Axe-plorer (talk · contribs) 00:20, 27 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) I will review this.14:01, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Would it be appropriate to use any of the numbers in the aftermath section in the unused "damages" parameter of the infobox?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:10, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Relief fund are not damage estimate I won't include Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 16:50, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Should you be using inflation adjustments? E.g. Should the article say $1.17 million ($1.38 million in 2023) instead of just $1.17 million or $24 million ($28.3 million in 2023) instead of $24 million?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:15, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Probably needed, it's already 5 years and considerable inflation between then and now. Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 17:36, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Do we have a article for the previous 2011 quake that you could include?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:18, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry, it is in the LEAD. Remember the WP:LEAD is suppose to summarize the main body. Anything in the LEAD should have greater detail in the main body (or from the other perspective the LEAD is a summary of what is in the main body).-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:20, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  It was already in the body section Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 17:49, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Make sure all details in the LEAD have greater detail in the main body.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:21, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
A secion on the region's geological history has been added. Basically a summary of the Geology section Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 17:19, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This includes the first sentence of the Earthquake section. It should begin a paragraph with greater detail than is in the LEAD.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:24, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The entire section is already detailed-rich. I've retitled the headers to address that. Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 17:24, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
For an article of this length, please make sure each section of the article is summarized in the LEAD.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:29, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
BTW, Keep some of these comments in mind if you ever renominate 1920 Xalapa earthquake or any other subject for FA.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:29, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I am requesting Pre-FAC comments right now if you want to help out Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 17:34, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]