Talk:Blank Space/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Ultimate Boss (talk · contribs) 02:41, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I use to listen to this song all the time when I was 13-14! I'll review this within the next 1-2 days! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 02:41, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Ultimate Boss; Any updates on the GAN? HĐ (talk) 10:31, 22 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
"who acts erratically upon suspecting her boyfriend's loyalty and is ready to change boyfriends right after a breakup." Is there a source that backs this up? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 19:47, 24 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, it is in the Music video section

"In a retrospective commentary, Billboard's Richard S. He wrote that on "Blank Space"" Grammar issues
@The Ultimate Boss: Could you elaborate? The sentence is understandable imo,, HĐ (talk) 01:13, 25 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@HĐ: When I read it out loud, it sounds kind of akward. Get rid of the he and it would sound better. "Billboard's Richard S. wrote".The Ultimate Boss (talk) 02:11, 25 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@The Ultimate Boss: No, his full name is "Richard S. He"; it's not supposed to be two sentences. I'd probably remove the middle name initial to rule out any possible confusions then, HĐ (talk) 02:50, 25 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
Ok.
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
Ok.
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Ok.
Overall:
Pass/Fail: On hold