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Nominator: IanTEB (talk · contribs) 21:43, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:53, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

This is quite an old GAN, so here is the review much due! --K. Peake 08:53, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Move the last two sentences of the first paragraph to coming after the writing credits instead for the most appropriate order
  •  Done
  • Reworded this a little differently; let me know what you think
  • "which was compiled onto the DVD Gūzen no Kiroku on November 16, 2005." → "which were compiled onto the DVD Gūzen no Kiroku in November 2005." as this is too much info for the lead with the exact date
  •  Done
  • "in 2010 and also featured" → "in 2010, and also featured"
  •  Done

Background and development

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  • First para looks good!
  • "Before performing live, the band first" → "Before performing live, Sakerock first"
  •  Done
  • "based on keyboard" → "based on keyboards"
  •  Done
  • The zeroth album quote is not sourced
  • The comment under Yuta says: 一枚目というより０枚目という感じ ("Rather than our first album, its more of our zeroth.")

Writing and production

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  • Audio sample looks good!
  • "insignificant, interesting livelihood" quote is not sourced
  • There is a quote by Gen Hoshino in the review of Life Cycle: 生活っていうのは、こんなにくだらなくて、おもしろい ("Livelihood is this insignificantly interesting")
  • Same as above

Release and reception

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  • "and was reported to have" → "and were reported to have"
  •  Done
  • "indicating that it sold less than" → "indicating having sold less than"
  •  Done
  • "described it as" → "described the album as"
  •  Done
  • "enjoyed sound's focus" → "enjoyed their focus"
  • Changed to just "the focus"
  • The reprint is not sourced
  • Fixed; I linked the wrong CDJournal ref

Credits and personnel

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  • I think it would be better to avoid name all of the members themselves or write the name of the band for the top credit
  • My apologies, but I'm not sure what you mean here. I've copied the format used on articles like Documentaly

Track listing

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Format → Format(s)
  •  Done

References

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  • Copyvio score looks top notch at 1%!!!!
  • Fix MOS:CAPS issues with refs 2, 8, 9, 10, 11, 13, 15, 16, 17, 18, 20, 22, 23, 24, 25 and 26; to specify, this refers to when full words are capitalised that should not be
  • This came up during the last review as well, I'll copy the response I gave there: "There are no capitalization rules in Japanese, so altering to title case would be inaccurate to the correct spelling of the titles. Hence, I believe this is not a mere stylistic function."
  • Shouldn't ref 7 only cite Kakubarhythm?
  • Kakubarhythm were technically the publisher, but I've removed it since it's probably unneeded
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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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