Talk:Paulina Luisi/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 01:03, 9 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Spookyaki (talk · contribs) 23:42, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 21:40, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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A few formatting and syntax issues, but the article is quite solid. Ping me when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 21:59, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

Lead

She was born in Colón, Argentina on Add comma after Argentina (MOS:GEOCOMMA)
- Done. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
No need to link Europe.
- Removed. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The proper names in Spanish do not need to be italicized except in limited circumstances. See MOS:BADITALICS: Some proper names—including personal names, place names, and the names of organizations—are usually not italicized as non-English vocabulary. One of these would be publications, as seen later in the article.
- For the organization names, I was using the conventions listed on WikiProject Uruguay. As for the names of publications, would they not need to be italicized as titles? (not as non-English words) Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, that's the exception I'm noting. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:47, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I tweaked the presentation to align with some suggestions I got at Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Text formatting. Passing. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 01:00, 9 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Early life and education

Her mother, Maria Teresa Josefina Janicki, was a women's suffrage activist of Polish descent and her father, Angel Luisi, was a socialist and educator of Italian ancestry Add a comma after "descent", as there are two sentences linked. See WP:CINS
- Done. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Activism and career

Linking to Batlle's article in "Batllista" instead of a red link may help. I thought it was a possible typo.
- Done. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
MOS:LOGICAL is worth your time to read and fix a few quote issues.
- Fixed them I believe. This was my first ever GA nomination and I was still getting used to Wikipedia style conventions at the time. Appreciate it, though!
International Labour Organization (ILO) No need to provide the acronym as no subsequent mention in the article uses this (this is a general item and I see it once or twice). Consider a wikilink to the organization name though.
- Removed. Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
she hosted Radio Femenina Try she was an announcer at Radio Femenina. She couldn't have hosted the whole station as it's not a program!
- Changed to "...she was a regular announcer on Radio Femenina..." Spookyaki (talk) 22:33, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Sourcing and spot checks

11, 19, 25, 29, 30

No issues (including access to Marino 2019). Earwig catches attributed quotes and some phrases including organization names that are not a concern.

Images

All images are PD. Encouragement: Add alt text for image accessibility. The map will have by far the longest alt text as the others are probably going to be short.

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