Talk:Suryakumar Yadav/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Magentic Manifestations (talk · contribs) 10:55, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 00:49, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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You're going to lose an image that apparently is a copyvio, I have a bunch of copy cleanup, but there's only one real ref issue I found. Ping when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:15, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Copy changes

Lead

Put (T20I) after Twenty20 International, as the acronym is used in the lead.
Hyphenate "first-class"

Early life

Bombay (now Mumbai), Maharashtra on Add a MOS:GEOCOMMA after Maharashtra
Does BARC refer to anything linkable?
Complete the appositive with a comma after Vengsarkar

Early/domestic career

Bharat Petroleum Corporation Limited team Probably no need for "team"
Add "in" between "match" and "February"
Hyphenate "run-getters"
Parsi Gymkhana club Remove "club" (not in proper name of team)
He scored 249 runs in final against Payyade Sports Club in the Police Shield tournament in 2021, winning the "Best Batsman of the Final" award and helped the club to win the tournament for the first time since 1956. Add "the" before "final" and a comma after "award"
For the first mention of ODI, expand acronym: "one-day international (ODI)"

International career

He went on to score a half-century in the match and his performance in the game was praised by then Indian captain Virat Kohli.
- Add a comma after "match" (WP:CINS)
- Hyphenate after "then" (should be "then–Indian captain")
In July 2021, Yadav was called up as a replacement player to the Indian test squad for the away series against England, but did not play a match. Remove comma after England (CINS)
Comma after "in the World Cup"
In November 2021, he was named in the Indian test squad for their home series against New Zealand, but was not selected in the playing XI for any of the games. Remove comma after Zealand
Hyphenate "limited-overs" (as an adjective)
Is "come-back" normally hyphenated in Indian English?
Hyphenate "top-ranked" in the second L3 header
Is it normal for "1000" to be hyphenated in this way as not "1,000"?
"eleven fours and seven sixes" (so "eleven" and "seven" are consistent)
In January 2023, he achieved 910 rating points, the second best ever in the history of men's T20I rankings and was named as the captain of the ICC Men's T20I Team of the Year for 2022.
- "Best ever in the history" is redundant. Try "second-best in the history"
"part the Indian" missing "of"
The article does not mention that he won Cricketer of the Year again ([1]) Presumably the 2024 winner will be announced soon.

IPL

He was a prolific run score Should be "run-scorer"
Complete the appositive with a comma after "three seasons"
on 12 May 2023 The year is redundant as you already indicate "2023 season" in this sentence.

Playing style

Hyphenate "hard-hitting" as an adjective.
Is anything here enough to add more cite invokes earlier in the paragraph?

Sourcing and spot checks

Reviewed: 14, 15, 17, 33, 68, 74, 76, 88, 95, 102

[33] needs another ref to indicate he did not play though he was called up.
No other issues.

Images

One of the images is a copyvio (not your fault). File:Suryakumar.jpg was lifted from Cricbuzz at https://www.cricbuzz.com/cricket-news/92473/suryakumar-left-out-of-vijay-hazare-trophy-squad-on-disciplinary-grounds . It needs to go and likely may be gone by the time you review this. Other images are fine. Encouragement: Add alt text.