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- Nominator(s): Birdienest81talk and RunningTiger123 (talk) 09:55, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
We are nominating the 2023 Primetime Emmys because we believe it has great potential to become a Featured List. I followed how the 2020, 2021, 2022, and 2024 were written and structured. Note: RunningTiger123 is also listed as a co-nominator since he made considerable and significant contributions to this list. Birdienest81talk 09:55, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
Image review
[edit]- File:75thEmmysPoster.jpeg - Fair use
- File:Jeremy Allen White, AT&T Center, 2013.jpg - CC BY-SA 2.0
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- File:Anthony Anderson 2010.jpg - CC BY-SA 3.0
- All images have proper captions, alt text, though must change the images size using |upright rather than a fixed px size.
- @Birdienest81: Here are my comments! Arconning (talk) 10:38, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Arconning: I believe Birdienest81 has addressed the image sizing. RunningTiger123 (talk) 18:44, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
OlifanofmrTennant
[edit]- Paragraph 2 appears to be a MOS:SOB violation
- I thought MOS:SOB is when two or more links are directly next to each other and appear to be one link; the commas here prevent that from happening. RunningTiger123 (talk) 18:56, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
- "[Downtown Los Angeles], [California]" MOS:GEOLINK violation
- Unpipe Peacock Theater and just use the Microsoft theater redirect per [[WP:NOTBROKEN]
- "The ceremony returned to the Microsoft Theater in Downtown Los Angeles, California, after two years at other venues due to the COVID-19 pandemic." clarify that the Microsoft theater has been the venue since 2008
- Unless I'm missing something, the previous three points appear to be from the 74th ceremony's page. RunningTiger123 (talk) 18:56, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
- I mustve been thinking off a different policy Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:13, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
- Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Lead Actress in a Comedy Series is linked twice in the Winners and Nominees prose
- The Bear had some contraversy about it being considered a comedy could you write about it in either Ceramony information subpage ([1][2][3][4]
- I'm open to more input on this, but I don't know that this is an issue specific to this show or this ceremony. I think there's a better place for it at the show's article and maybe at the main Primetime Emmys article. RunningTiger123 (talk) 18:56, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
- That's all I got, ping me when done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 23:34, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
- @OlifanofmrTennant: See above. RunningTiger123 (talk) 18:56, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
- Well I wont oppose on the bear thing. Support Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:14, 12 January 2025 (UTC)
- @OlifanofmrTennant: See above. RunningTiger123 (talk) 18:56, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
History6042's comments
[edit]Grammar
[edit]- "were honored included All in the Family" -> "were honored were All in the Family" Were makes much more sense here than included.
- "All in the Family. Ally McBeal, Cheers, Grey's Anatomy, and The Sopranos." -> "All in the Family, Ally McBeal, Cheers, Grey's Anatomy, and The Sopranos." This should be a comma, not a period.
- "let host Anderson's mom Doris Bowman interrupt", "let host Anderson's mom, Doris Bowman, interrupt"
- "acceptance speech as "terribly awkward"." -> "acceptance speech was "terribly awkward"."
- "host Anderson's mom" -> "Anderson's mother" The word host is not necessary here, it's not a title.
WP:MOS
[edit]- I am not sure if its avoidable but there is a definite violation of WP:SEAOFBLUE in paragraph 2.
- As above, I disagree; SEAOFBLUE says
do not place links next to each other, to avoid appearing like a single link
, which the commas prevent. Maybe WP:OVERLINK is what you meant, but I personally think the links to the winning shows are relevant. RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:04, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
- As above, I disagree; SEAOFBLUE says
- Maybe something about the delay should be added to the lede. History6042😊 (Contact me) 01:13, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
- There's a sentence in the first paragraph; do you think that should be expanded? RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:04, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
- Yes, maybe a bit more detail. If you do not think its justified however you do not have to. History6042😊 (Contact me) 19:14, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
- There's a sentence in the first paragraph; do you think that should be expanded? RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:04, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
- @History6042: Updates have been made. RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:04, 11 January 2025 (UTC)